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Comment on piece: Adjusting to America

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Review of Adjusting to America

A news piece focusing on the growing Somali refugee population in Columbus Ohio. Covers the potential pitfalls faced by these new immigrants, and the challenges of introducing American-style democractic principles to a community with little or no experience of democracy in their home country.

Comment on piece: Democracy on the Block

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Review of Democracy on the Block

A celebration of human nature using the lens of democracy and the very real voices and stories of NEW YORKERS both native and immigrant .
The hour is engaging - not heavily narrated at all. Content is simultaneously light and thoughtful .
The pace is lively and varied as the voices and nations. It is a mult-national flag - perfect for November's Democracy collaboration but even beyond that - like July 4th.
NB: although listed as humorous, it's more New Yorkous than funny.

VM

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Review of Harvey Pekar: My Father (deleted)

A belated personal tribute from a son to his father, full of regret and anguish over things unsaid, and feelings unexpressed. Would make a thought-provoking, but not uplifting, addition to a father's day line up. Great voice, simple delivery.

Comment on piece: Democracy on the Reservation

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Review of Democracy on the Reservation

very timely for November's contemplation of democracy in general but more specifically to NM Native American governmental endeavors.
A chock full, straightforward news feature.

Comment on piece: My Own Private Alaska

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Review of My Own Private Alaska

Want something a little different for pledge drive? listeners fed up with "call in your pledge now please... send us money etc..?" well here is a homage to public radio, combined with some lovely writing on what life is all about in small town Alaska. Part commentary, part extended funder spot, makes you glad your in the business of public radio. Whether it will make the phones ring, that is another question...! HW.

Comment on piece: Forget Cinderella

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Review of Forget Cinderella

Christine Wong, a first generation Asian-American, elegantly illustrates the cultural diffences between her and her parents. She also reveals their shared cultural traditions as she prepares for her wedding.

Wong addresses large issues with refreshing simplicity. Her commentary is ideal for Morning Edition or All things Considered.

Comment on piece: Street Music

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Review of Street Music

an unusual approach to a travel picture not following a linear path...sort of ethereal..... based on the sounds of a Piazza in Bologna Italy.

Comment on piece: 10 years after L.A.

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Review of 10 years after L.A.

This is a provocative interview with Filmmaker Dai-Sil Kim. She's made the documentary "Wet Sand: voices From LA Ten Years After," which addresses race relations ten years after the riots.

This is a piece that has a lot of flexibility in terms of content. It could be aired on PRI's "The World," as it deals with many ethnic communities; the obstacles and cultural mores that immigrants face. It also sounds like something that would be on "Alternative Radio."

It would also be an appropriate piece to play on or around the Fourth of July or Martin Luther King Day as it addresses race relations, civil rights and discrimination.

This interview is dense, compelling and relevant

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Review of Cheerleader Camp (deleted)

The narrator reflects on the inspiration provided by the local cheerleader camp... He imagines that the campers are his personal cheerleaders helping him through the day.

Comment on piece: How to Sing the Star-Spangled Banner

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Review of How to Sing the Star-Spangled Banner

Cute. Very quick.

Might work as offbeat fill or tangent to baseball or vocal-music story.

Comment on piece: Habits of the Heart - "Sampler"

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Review of Habits of the Heart - "Sampler"

A nice overview of the series, what it is about , it's style and ethos. An innovative approach to covering religious issues; for instance I had never really considered the religious content of The Simpsons nor the existence of drive-in churches! This sampler seems to be more Fresh Air/NPR news mag than This American Life; a good mix of interview, first person stories, vox pop etc.

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Review of Hitchhiking Cop Improv (deleted)

A peak behind the scenes of a radio piece on hitchhiking. The listener is right there on the side of a busy highway in CA, where 3 friends argue about who gets to play a cop in the recreation of a rather undramatic scene in a radio piece that must still be in the pipeline; the piece really focuses on the type of friendly banter, and at times abrasive bickering, that goes on between friends who've known each other a long time. Nice use of music and stereo sound.
A note of caution for broadcasters, the f-word is used.

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Review of Avoiding Major Highways (deleted)

Intriguing concept. Written and recorded in a car to document road-less-taken thoughts with a sense of immediacy. Eric's clear voice shines with studio-like presence right through to the 3:00 end point of the narrative. Automobile interior and exterior ambience extends to 3:22 making a useful bed for live announcer talk-over. A contemplative piece that could follow a fact-filled, news report about the relentless pace of post-modern culture or set up an in depth peice about the new slow - slow food or slow music.

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Review of Bigfoot Speaks (deleted)

Nice story and certainly works as it stands.

But I'm feeling several what-ifs about it: for example, maybe a little more mystery? Start with your man's story -- his first sighting. We go almost 45 seconds of prep when, with one of the modern wonders of the world, what the listener wants is surprise, even uncertainty.

Another concern: this man clearly believes in Bigfoot. He's got the experience none of us have. Rather than asking him if he's nuts, let him just say he's not nuts. Look: he pays his bills.

You're right: this is a story about faith. His faith is the light (sorry) in this piece. Let his sureness of faith, without comment, challenge our lack of belief.

Comment on piece: What is Poetry?

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Review of What is Poetry?

I like so much of this I feel like one of those cranks in the bleachers at Fenway. Blame me for knowing too much about too little, or else letting what I know simply get in the way.

Ditto the five-star review with one exception: the music. Sandburg rose to fame as editor/collector of The American Songbag, a solid five years before the Lomaxes (father and son) under the WPA pillaged the south. This guy loved folk music. The music featured here is a vamp, a loop, complete with noodling solos, whereas a folk tune has a clear beginning, middle, and end. I like the use of the rhythm of the music here, but the drums in the first segment combat the voice. At the very least, ditch the drum version so the words provide the percussion for the piece.

Or else find a recording of a traditional tuning, goose its tempo until it fits Sandburg's rhythm. After all, that was the kind of music lurking in his mind.

Comment on piece: Acadie Found

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Review of Acadie Found

Very beautiful composition - provocatively soothing. Excellent to have in the arsenal for the needed moment of respite on the air.

Comment on piece: Old Together

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Review of Old Together

This warmed the cockles of my heart; but it is not sickly sweet. For such a short piece, it is packed full of heartfelt, love filled words and memories. Gives hope to the married amongst us, unusual in these times.

Lucky producer's wife!

Comment on piece: Letter from the Dead

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Review of Letter from the Dead

This is a lovely elegy. It has all of those desired elements that make a perfect commentary: traces of irony, a narrative arc, it is sweet but not sentimental. And like all good radio for a moment it transports you elsewhere.

Comment on piece: An Anatomy of Humanity

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Review of An Anatomy of Humanity

Unusual, given all that has been written about the event, to find a new angle on the events of 9/11. Really LOVELY writing, drawing on producer's new life in alaska, and medical background, but a lot to take in in one sitting; I wanted to pause and digest. Touches on the common theme of helplessness that all of us felt, far from NYC and DC. This is utlimately about the aftermath, recovery and renewal, and how we heal, in our individual ways.

Comment on piece: An Anatomy of Humanity

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Review of An Anatomy of Humanity

This is a beautifully written piece that revolves around September 11th; a piece that is part commentary, part monologue.

It is elliptical, poetic, and artfully constructed and in the end it delightfully folds onto itself. The writing is also vigorous and vivid and very textured. This piece remarkably addresses philosophical, intellectual and emotional complexities without a smidgen of sentiment. What is most unfortunate about this piece is the reading. It is too fast, kind of cornball, and in the end the reading undoes a lot of what was beautifully done. Nonetheless it is worth your time.